Wednesday, 30 May 2018

LO4: Evaluation of radio show

Evaluation of the show:


I feel that the radio show is very in keeping with the breif we were given as well as targeting out audience in an effective way. This can be seen when each of the three sections is analysed individually as that each is slightly different. 

Section 1) News section: 

The first full section for our show was the News section which I was in charge of writing. In order to make sure that each of the four stories that I presented was accurate I made sure to get information for all of them from several different sources as not to broadcast any untrue information which may be effected by political bias or gatekeeping. 

The stories that I chose to cover were also all very focused on the local area a to fit the brief well and I included the story about the upcoming Artic Mokeys album as to further reach our show's goal of being a music focused project which I feel was appropriate as that the Artic Mokeys are from the Sheffield area which again fits with the local theme. 

Section 2)  Sports section:  


The sports section was a difficult one for us to decide on as a group regarding its focus. In the end when Matt was writing it we had told him to take a more general approach to sport as that it is not a subject that can be fully presented as Sheffield based. I feel like this section strongly adheres to the codes and conventions of a sports section on a regular radio show.

Again Matt made sure to check multiple sources for the stories he chose to cover which makes the news presented trustworthy and accurate.

Section 3) Discussion section:

The discussion section was a more creative idea for our show so it was more difficult for us to understand the codes and conventions that radio shows would have built up if a talking section of this nature been commonplace. I stead of this we needed to rely on the norm for shorter discussion sections which can be found on radio talk shows and decided that the topic of "housemate horror Stories" was appropriate as that it fitted the target audience well. As that housemates are a large part of living in university and many students will find the idea of having a poor roommate quite relatable. 

Use Of Music: 

I feel that the use of music in our show is one of the most professional parts of its production as that it compliments our target audience very well. This can be seen in our choice of songs ("Feel it still", "fluorescent Adolescent" and "She's electric")  which are all songs which fit into the genres of Alternative rock and Indie rock and therefore will bring enjoyment to our choice of demographic. 


As well as what I have written above I feel that the show flows very well as that I have made sure to order it in such a way that the sections are ordered in such a way  that it fits with the nature of a typically ordered script.

Frazer

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Evaluation - 
I feel that the radio well fitted the intentions set out in the brief, whilst also directly and effectively appealing to the intended target audience. This is consistent through each sections of the show.

Strengths - 
From reviewing the radio show there are several strengths of our show. One main strength to the show would be how It follows the codes and conventions well. Commonly, radio talk shows are hosted in the morning and involve news, discussion topics and music. All of which are present throughout our show. Other clear conventions would be the use of sound, jingles are used to introduce the show and again throughout. This is beneficial as it clearly identifies the show and gives the SCC radio brand a more memorable image in the listeners mind. Another strength of the show is the diversity, we have created a talk show that has radio hosts of both genders. This is a positive because it is inclusive and this translates to the audience as they are able to identify an ideal self/ideal partner from the radio hosts. By doing this, our audience can relate to the hosts within the show. This is important because radio talk shows are about making the audience feel connected to the hosts. This is also important when creating a brand as the personalities of the hosts become the audience’s favourites as they buy into their personalities.

Weaknesses -
Within our radio show potential weaknesses could be seen in the sport segment. This section features little about local sporting events or teams which would be better suited to the genre of a local radio show. It could also be perceived that the back and forth between the presenters could be improved in this section by involving an interview with a sporting personality to better the flow, or alternatively source different presenters whom specialise in the sports etc, to make for a more natural dialogue which would keep the listeners engaged throughout. 

Evaluation - Audio Levels & Changes and Amendments
To produce the edit a combination of garage band and Adobe Audition was used. Initially, in the studio, garage band was used to capture the audio and produce the first rough edit. This was used as it allowed us to quickly and easily record the audio directly to the Imac whilst simulatenusly allowing us to add basic effects and adjusemntts to the audio/ voices. Once recorded, the raw offline edit was exported then imported into Adobe Audition. This was chosen to do so as it offered for a greater degree of editing capabilites, this is also a reason why it is the industry standard across audio and radio production, again making for another reason why we chopse this software to produce the show.
Audio Interface // Studio Setup // Adobe Audition Edit
Throughout the whole procces of both recording and editing the show the key aspect which had to be taken into consideration was the audio levels at each stage of production. In order to have clean audio that did not peak or distort or neither be too quiet the levels had to be adjusted acordingly. When recording on the Focusrite interface, the input gain for the mic being used to record the show was set ot around -12db. This ensured that all the auido recorded would have a very slim chance of peaking and ultimetely distorting due to the extreme loudness at parts of the show/ script, this allowed for a proffesional sounding and clean audio recording which could be later edited. In post production the audio levels were again adjusted, this time the levels were increased to around -3db which made the radio presenters loud and clear, with no peaking or distortion due to initallt recording at -12db. However, due to there beign three different presenters, naturally there a diffrences in volume and pitch etc. Therefore, once i had ran through the whole show and condesed it down to the key talking pointst by cutting all the excces using the cut tool, the presenters track was selcted and then 'match clip loudness' was selceted. This meant Audtion went through each clip and automatically adjusted them so the volume was consitent throughout. A similar process was also done to the music track and bedding music track, however to a lower level in order for the bed music to not over power the voices of the presenters but agian still keep it consitent. Other changes which had to be done to the levels included keyframing audio levels. This meant applying keyframes at key points and either lowering or higherign the levels, which resulted in the audio smoothly transitioning in audio levels, this was used for example when the music was introduced on top of the presenters and i wanted to smooth transition into oneanother as seen throughout proffesional radio shows, which often feature very few abrupt cuts to music. This is evidenced below. Final changes to the levesl including adding cross fades to certain segemnts to smoothly round of the piece and finally selecting all tracks of the multitrack session and mastering it all to -1db. 
Matching Clip Loudness // Keyframing levels
Throughout the production of the show there were also several changes and amendments made to the piece. Most noticeably, I had to re record the radio advert. The first draft of the advert was noted to be not very enthusiastic with the audio being slightly distorted also. Therefore, I rerecorded the audio using different settings and editing techniques, this resulted in a clearer, more pronounced and enthusiastic radio ad which suited the energetic and lively scene of the club being advertised.  In addition to this, bedding music was also added after the first draft however it was noted this was too loud in certain places which resulted in the presenters being over powered. As a result I reduced the volume further to subtly give a background to the presenters. All these changes allowed for a consistent radio show across the whole ten minute duration, with the choice of software making it achievable. The funcionalties of Adobe Auidtion greatly improved the production of the show, with its abilties to edit as part of a mulittrack session meaing i could easily sepreate out each element of the show on its own indicudal track for an easy workflow and key alterations to gain etc. Another benfit to using this software opoosed to simpler more basic softwares would be the effects anf functioanlity of the software. Audition provied inudstry standard presets and effects all with full customizabiltyiy, one succ example would be the echoe effect used on some of the sound effects of the show. As a whole this allowed us to record, produce and export a show which mimics the traits and conventions of a professional radio talk show.

Oliver

LO4: Producing the radio show

Equipment Setup: Oliver
Recording audio:
Frazer: It was my job to speak for a section of the radio show. 

Evidencing editing:
Pictured above is the final edit for the radio show, this involves the presenters audio, bedding music, sound effects, adverts, jingles and music. All of which was organised onto individual lablede tracks to making editing easier and clearer.  
Throughout the production a variety of changes and effects were added in order to produce the final professional radio show.
Pictured above can be seen all the assets used as part of the radio show. This involved: three separate bedding tracks, presenters audio, music tracks (No Scrubs, Feel it still, Fluorescent adolescent), radio jingle, The Leadmill advert, big ben bong, news jingle, DJ scratches and radio static for transitions.
Evidenced above can be seen the use of the echo effect. This was added in order to provide a smooth transition between audio clips. This is because by introducing a echo, it removes the usual harsh and abrupt finish and allows the audio to fade out cleanly, making for a more professional show. In addition to this, it can also be seen to make aspects of the show more dramatic and draw attention to them.
Seen above is examples of how i adjusted the levels to transition between the different elements and tracks of the radio show. The volume key frames are represented by the yellow line. As seen the music bed track volume was lowered to provide a subtle background to the audio of the presenters. Key frames were also added to fade out the bed music as the song is introduced. In order to smoothly introduce the song a cross fade was used in addition to lowering the volume, the volume was then dramatically introduced once the song was introduced by the presenter, as represent by the steep line. This is synonymous with the style of most other radio shows of a similar genre. 
In order to ensure the volume of the radio show is consistent throughout as seen on all professional radio shows, once the final edit was finalised all the clips were selected and the "match clip loudness" was selected this ensured none of the audio peaked and was all consistent throughout.

Throughout the edit various roles were undertaken by different team members. The radio jingle was recorded and edited by Charlotte, with Matt and Frazer producing the initial offline edit, and myself editing all components together into the final radio show.
From feedback from peers and self assessment it was decided that a few changes would be made. This involved re-recording the radio advert in order to get clearer audio which was then edited into a new version of the advert. In addition to this, from feedback it was noted that the levels of the bed music was marginally to loud in places. Subsequently, using the key frames i lowered the gain of the clip in certain places to make the audio of the presenters clearer and more defined/ not overpowered.

Linked below is the finished product:

LO3: Legal and Ethical Issues associated with planned show

When creating a radio programme it Is of up most important to make sure that the content complies with several law that are enforced heavily in the UK

Legal consideration one: The Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988: 

This law, brought into force in the late 1980s protects the trademarked products of companies so that other people or companies cannot create similar products that may mislead audiences and cause the original creator to lose revenue. The law carries harsh penalties with people who violating it facing orders to had over all profits of the copied products as well as a maximum sentence of 6 months in prison and an unlimited fine.
In order to make sure that my radio show doesn't violate copyright law I will make sure that it doesn't contain any licensed assets (logos, slogans or names.)

Legal consideration two: Slander (Defamation act 2013)

Slander is a law which protects the reputations of people against broadcasted falsehood. It is a very important law as that without it people would be allowed to state untrue information about people which could have devastating effects on their livelihoods and mental health. A famous example of people who sued for being slandered you;d be the 2017 case of the Country of Ireland suing the independent magazine for making untrue allegations about it's employees.
In accordance to this law I will make sure that the show does not

Legal consideration 3: Data protection (data protection act 1998)

Data protection is of vital importance when creating a media product which will be distributed to a large amount of people as that it involves the handling of peoples personal information. For example under this law it would likely have to be stated somewhere in the advertisement for a call in that the caller is allowing their first name to be used on air however it is unacceptable for the host to then state the callers personal phone number, race, religious background, address or sexual orientation on air as that that isomer information than a person may feel comfortable having shared with a large amount of people.

Ethical issue one: Representation: 

My task is to create a local radio show In Sheffield which Is a multi cultural environment. For this reason we should create a show which represents the many different genders, ethnicity and religious beliefs that make up this city. We will make sure, for this reason, that the show contains the voices and opinions of many different types of people and will also not convey any negative stereotypes about a group of people.

OFcom: 
The UK Office of communications or OFcom is the major regulatory body for all shows that are broadcast on publicly accessible radio services. It is therefore very important that while we are writing, recording and Editing SCC radio that we adhere the regulations that they have put in place in order to make sure that our show is acceptable to be shown to a UK audience.

LO3: Codes and Conventions of Genre of planned show

LO3 Codes and Conventions of Genre of planned show (Matt Frost)

The codes and conventions of a breakfast show is to be very up beat in the approach and the presenters
should aim to communicate this and enforce the ideal partner/ideal self. The show must be light
hearted and not to be to hard hitting or serious as it is first thing in the morning (however the news
section must be fully candid) and people want to be motivated. In my lo 1 research i noticed that allot of 
radio shows have funny talking segments which are based on everyday life i.e. dating etc. The breakfast 
shows will also always play music to get their listeners motivated. I also noticed that they often have 
listener call in for prizes or song choices, this helps to get the audience involved in the show. 
I have also noticed that in the conventions of a talk show there is a great deal of back and forth 
between the presenters, which keeps the audience engaged and listening it also allows for anecdotes and 
content to be communicated seamlessly.



How our planned ideas reflect these codes and conventions



By looking at the running order of our planned script you can see, our planned idea reflects the codes and conventions as we planned our radio show so that we were not having hard hitting content in our discussion section and we have put music at the begging of our show and will motivate people to get out of bed. We have then altered our running order so that the sport section came up before the news section to ease our listeners into the News section, which may be more hard hitting. We have also included a 'Topical discussion section, which allows us to fill our show with anecdotes and stories, which can be sent in by listeners and our listeners will find them relatable.

Friday, 27 April 2018

LO3: Planning a radio show

post written by Frazer ('Me/ myself' refers to Frazer)

An initial ideas section written by me and presented by Oliver.


LO3 Planning  a radio show
A Mindmap of Initial ideas for our radio show which Matt and I worked own together. 


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Advertising Ideas:
Audience Profile and moodboard of ideas:
|Oliver



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Scheduling and justification

We have scheduled for our show to begin at 06:00am-10:00am as from this time
Our show will feature several different sections in order to make it both fit into the codes and

onwards university, work and college students will be starting to wake up to begin their 
day and they will be able to listen to this on the commute, whilst they get ready or both. 
The radio show will finish at 10:00am and then switch to a different show which will be 
hosted by different presenters 10:00am is a good time for this after 4 hours the 
presenters will need a break and as people arrive at work and college they will 
inevitably tune out anyway making this a good time for a change over.
Matt
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Content

The content of our radio show will feature a talk show segment. This is because we are 
creating a radio talk show. Our demographic target audience are 18-24 so the content within 
our show should reflect that. That’s why we will be having a segment where we talk about 
issues such as student life and the issues surrounding it. As our show will be aired in the 
morning we will be incorporating these themes in a fun and interactive way by asking the 
audience for their opinions on topics such as how to deal with a bad roommate or the worst 
night out in uni. Linking this to the target audience it is appealing because this content is 
relatable to them and they’d find it entertaining. To add, we will be playing local musicians 
alongside famous artists such as the Arctic Monkeys. Sheffield is famous for its bands and by 
having music that appreciates local talent will make students listen to it as they want to 
support and listen to good local artists. 
Charlotte
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Jingles

The Jingles for the show must build the shows brand identity and include the shows 
name and give a hint to the content of what is coming up to entice the listener in so 
they will stay on and want to listen to the show. The bedding music and theme of the 
radio show must also be upbeat and fitting with the theme and conventions of the show 
i.e. indie or techno bedding track.
Matt

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Frazer

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News section explanation: 

While creating the news section of the SCC morning show it will be of vital importance that I select 
stories that will be appropriate for the target audience that I am trying to reach. Below I have 
inserted several examples of stories which I have decided that I would use in the show as t=well as 
the reasons I thought would be of interest to them.

1) Artic Monkeys reunion:

The Artic Monkeys are an indie rock band from Sheffield and would likely reach the same target 
audience that SCC radio attempts to reach. Therefore, the story of their long awaited 7th studio 
album "Tranquillity base Hotel and Casino" would be of great interest to the people listening to the 
SCC morning show.
From investigation I found the date that the new album was to be released (That being the 11th of 
May 2018) as well as the fact that the band would be playing two dates in Sheffield in their 
upcoming tour.
I decided that this would make a great story for the show as that it fits so accurately with the target 
demographic as well as their associated interests so well.


















2) Jarvin Blake's murder

The ongoing investigation of the stabbing of Sheffield father of three Jarvin Blake is another news
story which I feel that my target audience would be interested in hearing about as that It is a 
situation which Is ongoing and one which shows the ongoing epidemic of knife crime in the UK 
this year.

From investigation of this story on the websites of both the Sheffield Telegraph and The Star I 
found that police were stating that they were confident in catching his killer and that they were 
urging the public to come forward with any "Nuggets of information" that could help the put 
together the  full circumstances of the fathers tragic death.















3) Wakefield schools cleared: 

On the BBC website I found a story about the Wakefield academies trust (an organization which up 
until recently owned 21 more schools than it does now) one of the schools which belonged to this 
family was Yewlands Academy Located in the Parsons Cross estate in Sheffield.
This story was of interest to me as that it was cleared of any wrongdoing after the police 
investigated.

I feel that this type of story would be interesting to my Sheffield target audience would be 
extremely interesting.


















4) Drones Being used to crack down on south Yorkshire crime:

On the Stars official website I found a sorry about the trailing of drones in use of aiding the police 
force in the Sheffield area at night. The fact that this story revolves around the idea of increased 
surveillance as well as new technology and the police force makes me think that my target 
demographic would find it very interesting.



 
















Other considerations:

When reporting news stories it is vital that nothing is inaccurate or untrue as that that could
potentially come under slander. 
the ordering of the stories Is also very important as that it matters when it somes to matching the 
codes and conventions of a real radio show as well as making an audience feel as if they are 
watching a professional product when viewing the SCC morning show. I have decided to order the 
stories as such. 

Wakefield academy of schools
Jarvin Blake 
Police Drones 
Artic Monkeys 
         

My reasoning for this was because many news stations like to have a story at the end of the news
section which is "on the lighter side." This helps the audience to start their day in a more cheerful 
mood despite knowing about the potentially upsetting news stories which they have heard. I have 
decided to do this within our show and in order to do this I have included the news of the new Artic 
Monkeys album (something that the audience would likely be exited for in order to help them start 
off their day in a good mood despite the stories that I have decided to broadcast. 
My final consideration concerns the at in which the news section begins. In many news broadcasts 
the section begins with several bulletins about what the days stories are. This is ,I feel, something 
that we should defiantly do with The SCC morning Show's NEWS section. before the beginning of 
the detailed reading of the news stories we will have mini bulletins separated by the sound of a 
ringing grandfather clock (as that this is a common sound effect used for this reason)  

Frazer
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Production name:
Sheffield City Radio
Episode #1


Charlotte: [Show begins at 6am]

6:00:00-6:00:10

[sound effect: SCC radio Jingle]

Good morning everyone and welcome to SCC Radio  The home of Sheffield student NEWS and conversation! with Frazer Mclean,
Matt:

6:00:10-6:00:11


Charlotte Cass,
Frazer:

6:00:11-6:00:12


And Matt Frost. 
Charlotte:

6:00:12-6:00:17

Today we have the biggest stories facing the region as well as a really interesting discussion section for you all to enjoy!

Matt:

6:00:17-6:00:20


Let’s jump right in with our News section! Right after a word from our sponsor.


Advertisement: (Spoken by Oliver)


6:00:20-6:00:45
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Frazer:

6:00:45-6:00:46

Today in the news-
Sound effect:
6:00:46-6:00:47
[Ringing bell]

Frazer:

6:00:47-6:01:00



an academy chain has been cleared of financial wrongdoing after a police investigation


Sound effect:


6:01:00-6:01:01

[Ringing bell]

Charlotte:

6:01:00-6:01:10


A statement has been released by the police stating that they are "confident in learning more about the fatal stabbing of a father of three


Sound effect:

6:01:10-6:01:11

[Ringing bell]

Frazer:

6:01:11-6:00:16

a beloved Sheffield band has announced their new album and tour dates




Sound effect:

6:01:16-6:01:17


[Ringing bell]

Frazer:

6:01:17-6:01:25


and new plans have been unveiled as to how drones could be used to combat rising South Yorkshire crime rates.


Sound effect:

6:01:25-6:01:40


[News Jingle]



Frazer:

6:01:40-6:01:45


But first our top story today is that the Wakefield Academy trust has been cleared of any wrongdoing in light of a police investigation.


Charlotte:

6:01:45-6:01:50

Suspicion was raised in relation to the finances of the company last September when an abrupt announcement was made that they would no longer be running 21 of their locations including the Sheffield based Yewlands academy.


Charlotte:

6:01:50-6:02:00

Our next story concerns the Murder of young father of three Jarvin.

Frazer:

6:02:00-6:02:02


Our next story concerns the Murder of young father of three Jarvin.

Matt:

6:02:00-6:02:10

The police have stated that they are confident in catching his killer or killers but have urged the public to come forward with “Nuggets of information” that may assist with the in the investigation

Charlotte:

6:02:10-6:02:15

Next it has been revealed that south Yorkshire police are looking into plans which will see drones used to combat the rising crime in the Sheffield area. 

Frazer:

6:02:15-6:02:20

Yes, the drones are going to take to the skies at night scanning the ground for any suspicious activity. This is a trial of a planned national use of the technology. 




Matt:

6:02:20-6:02:25



And today’s final story. The Arctic Monkeys have announced their 2018 tour and a new studio album titled “Tranquillity Base Hotel and Casino” 

Frazer:

6:02:25-6:02:30

The band will be touring the nation and playing two dates in Sheffield on the 18th and 19th of September at the Fly DSA arena. 

Charlotte:

6:02:30-6:02:35

That’s all for the news today which means it’s time to move onto sport.
[End of News section]

Sound effect:

6:02:35-6:02:55
[news jingle]
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Charlotte:

6:02:55-6:03:00
[Start of sports section]
[sports jingle]
This weekend we saw Daniel Ricciardo won the Chinese grand prix after Max Verstappen and Sebastien Vettel collided with each other and Lewis Hamilton called his performance a “disaster’. 


Frazer:

6:03:00-6:03:10

It has been a hard start to the F1 season for Lewis Hamilton after finishing 4th this weekend and not having won a race yet this season leaving him in 2nd place on the leader board below Sebastian Vettel. 


Charlotte:

6:03:10-6:03:15

In boxing news, Heavy weight boxer Tyson Fury announced his long anticipated return to the ring for the 9th June at the Manchester arena against an unconfirmed opponent. 


Frazer:

6:03:15-6:03:17


Who do you want to see him fight ? 


Charlotte:

6:03:17-6:03:23


I would really like to see him fight AJ I think that would be a massive fight, but Joshua has his WBA mandatory challenger Alexander Povetkin to fight first, which leaves Deontay wilder open for a big showdown between Fury and Wilder. 



Frazer:

6:03:23-6:03:35


At the Commonwealth games in Australia the England team win the gold in women’s netball, beating the Australian favourites 52-51."It's my dream come true," said head coach Neville. 


Charlotte:

6:03:35-6:03:43

Manchester City won the premier league title on Sunday after Manchester United lost in a shock 1-0 defeat to West Brom.


Frazer:

6:03:43-6:04:00
In a post-match interview Jose Mourinho said that Manchester united ‘Over complicated things’, which led to their defeat against West Brom

That’s all in the sports for today.
[End of sports section]

Charlotte:
6:04:00-6:04:05

Now it’s time for some Tunes to get your day started right!


Sound effect:

6:04:05-6:04:45
·         (Audio)"Fluorescent Adolescent" - "The Arctic Monkeys" (Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5yy8J067pYc). [play 20 secs]

·         "Feel It Still" - "Portugal. The Man" (Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PdKKoOiEgqY) [Play 20 secs]
Charlotte:

6:04:45-6:04:52

[Start of discussion section]

Good morning guys, I hope everyone’s having a good day so far So today. Welcome to our daily “Discussion section” where we talk about problems that you are facing. our topic of discussion today will be flatmate horror.

Frazer:

6:04:52-6:04:57

We asked you guys to tweet in your stories and I must admit some of them are intense. [Laughs]We took the time to sift through and find he worst ones.

Hopefully we can try give positive advice.

Charlotte:

6:04:57-6:05:03

okay so the first story is about two rival flats who took it so far that a tree ended up in the oppositions flat.

Frazer:

6:05:03-6:05:07



I never understood how flats rivalled like this. See my accommodation was calm and everyone just got along really but how?
Matt:

6:05:07-6:05:09



I know right like, What happened for a tree to end up in the fight for who’s better?
Charlotte:

6:05:09-6:05:12


Basically, it says here that both flats were filled with sports students, the rugby team and the football team were constantly at each other’s necks for which is the better sport.

Frazer:

6:05:12-6:05:17

It’s started off fun because they were always hosting iconic parties such as the take down. They were super dramatic and filled with testosterone but one day the footy lads wanted to show their strength.

Matt:

6:05:17-6:05:20


They all came together and put a tree through the rugby houses kitchen window

Frazer:

6:05:20-6:05:24

Oh wow, that’s quite something. I mean I can understand why the footballers wanted to showcase their strength but this is definitely a step too far.
Charlotte:

6:05:24-6:05:26


solutions? Maybe first off, al don’t shove trees through people’s windows.
Frazer:

6:05:26-6:05:29


[laughs] Yeah, I don’t think I have much to say. Maybe keep the rivalry on the field.
Charlotte:

6:05:29-6:05:40

Going back to what I was saying earlier, my flat didn’t have tension but, in the beginning, I remember there being one occasion where there was almost a fight because one girl accidentally set the kitchen on fire.


Frazer:

6:05:40-6:05:42


Did the girl happen to be you?


Charlotte:

6:05:42-6:05:48

[laughs] No. So what had happened was one girl has set up the toaster but she put the instructions in the crumb tray.


Matt:

6:05:48-6:05:53

She thought it was storage so fast forward. Someone goes to use her toaster and a fire starts.
Frazer:

6:05:53-6:05:56


My flat mate had managed to put it out but the toaster was ruined.

Charlotte:


6:05:57-6:06:10

So my flatmate freaked out because he wasn’t supposed to use it he did just out of laziness. He tried to hide the toaster and act as if it was never there but she was very insistent that we had a group meeting.

Matt:

6:06:10-6:06:12

He confessed and we all put money towards a communal toaster.

Charlotte:

6:06:12-6:06:17

ah you see. That’s a really good way to solve an issue.  If you’ve just tuned in we’re taking about flatmate horror stories. Tweet us @SHURadio to get involved. We’ve got more after the break
Frazer:

6:06:17-6:06:23

we asked you to vote a topic and roommate horror stories by far won. Our Twitter has been going mad for the past couple of days with your story submissions


Charlotte:

6:06:23-
6:06:27

we’ve talked about the toaster that divided the flat, rugby vs football but I think the worst submission we’ve had is the mouldy kitchen


Frazer:

6:06:27-6:06:35

This story is quite something. We didn’t think we would be able to give the story justice so we had our friend Liz write it down for us. Here’s what she said:


Charlotte:

6:06:35-6:06:40


Okay so it says here: I’ve had problems with flat mates since I joined uni and I’m in my third year but when I was in my first I lived in halls like everyone else.

Matt:

6:06:40-6:06:45


There was this girl and she’d always leave her pots and plates all over.
Charlotte:

6:06:45-6:06:53

This doesn’t sound too bad but one day I was cooking and I saw her grab a pot that had been used for spaghetti or something. She’d left it there for so long that there was mould in the pot.

Matt:

6:06:53-6:06:57


And I watched her empty the pot but she didn’t wash it at all. She just left the mould floating in the sink.
Charlotte:

6:06:57-6:07:06

That was strike one. I went into her room once to borrow something and literally every plate/ bowl had some form of moulding food and she always complained that she was getting sick.


Matt:

6:07:06-6:07:10

So as a good Simaritians I decided to mention to her that it’s not helping her health, we got into an argument and she reported me for bullying.

Charlotte:

6:07:10-6:07:15
I had to go through so much to prove that I wasn’t and that’s when I realised that some people just don’t want help.
Frazer:

6:07:15-6:07:20

Oh wow that’s quite a story! So did she have to speak to the head of the building or something? Because I know usually they just give you a warning.


Charlotte:

6:07:20-6:07:45

She’s written here “the accommodation had a no billing policy (obviously) and they view issues like that very serious so they were considering kicking me out and due to recent issues amongst students. It was a time that bulling was almost on a rise and I had to get all my flat mates to help me with my appeal to the case. It was very intense and I remember the girl finding it funny. I didn’t mean to offend her I was just being helpful but innit but I guess not everyone likes that.”

Matt:

6:07:45-6:07:48


She said that she just stayed away from her and didn’t speak to her again.

Frazer:

6:07:48-6:07:53

that’s quite a mature thing to do because it would be an instinct for a lot of people to get very riled up and argue which I suppose is a normal reaction to someone lying.


Charlotte:

6:07:53-6:07:57

I can’t even imagine what I would do in that situation. Plus the stress of exams and keeping on top of work. It all worked out good for her in the end so that’s good.


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·         "She's Electric" - "Oasis" (Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jILwt5DQk8A) [play 20 secs]


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Charlotte:

6:08:37-6:08:45

get involved on Twitter with the hashtag #mouldylies to let us know what you would do if your flatmate did the same.


Frazer:

6:08:45-6:08:50


Emilee said “ I think I’d go nuts and show them the room. She should’ve got kicked out for health reasons”


Charlotte:

6:08:50-6:09:10

@D_zilla has said “if I was her then I would have taken pictures of her room and her mess in the kitchen. What she did was vile and so is her behaviour. #reportthereporter


Frazer:

6:09:10-6:09:15

[laughs] well that’s a very good solution to a very big problem. Get at us at @shu #reporthereporter we want to hear from you

[End of discussion section]


Matt:

6:09:15-6:09:20

Unfortunately that’s all we have time for today. Be sure to tune back in to us same time tomorrow for more of the latest news, sports and top hits. Bye for now.
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